In the Short Story, Cyber Gangster, Todd can't even tie his own shoe. How did he ....

An educator, who was too shy to post, ask me about the short story,
entitled "Cyber Gangster" - It's a short story about a foster boy who
grows up to be one of the Internet's top hackers


Todd E. Chambers, can't tie his shoes. And the educator wanted to
know how he got out of grade school if he couldn't tie his own shoe.

She is right. If you are an educator, you can see that this one factor,
is a gap in reality.

The rewite would read as follows:

"Todd couldn't tie his own shoes in kindergarten. In order not to
get in trouble, he gave Joey, a penny every time, he needed his shoe tied.

By the first grade, Todd had lots of kids who wanted to work for
him. No one ever told the teacher.

I hope this clears the air.

sandy ingram
e-Publisher
Xica Love Stories.com